I'd like to develop this project further in to something more of a descriptive showpiece? I can envision it in my mind and when I worked on the story I tried to go in to as much detail as I could while trying to remain on a whimsical level. I think it would make a really neat digital short. Anyways, the story is extremely rough but i'd love to know what your thoughts are and if it even has enough "clout" as a story to hold up for at least a few minutes.
Thank you :)