I've been working on this song for about a month now, I have a well-done recording of it that I may or may not put up but we'll see. This is just quick and live so I hope you like it and can do something with it. 

Ribbon hanging from the ceiling of despair, freedom is what is lingering within our air, true love keeping naive children hanging on, broken describes the bloodied hearts that still stay strong. I just wanna be free, flying far across the seas, if the time comes that you wanna leave, at least I still have the memories. Moonlight guiding all to where they gotta be, midnight the trains are coming finally, guidelines the stars are the signs to where we'll go, good times the clock ticks on he's warning don't you know?  I just wanna be free, flying far across the seas, if the time comes that you wanna leave, at least I still have the memories. Cry your harmless tears on the Na fields, top the bucket 'til the acid spills, starting war over peace treaties, wear your white feather proud and freely. Pay your do's and let me feel safe, say I'm scared damnit say it to my face, all this time you've tossed us great fears, oiilless grease traps grind my gears.  I just wanna be free, flying far across the seas, if the time comes that you wanna leave, at least I still have the memories. I just wanna be free, flying far across the seas, if the time comes that you wanna leave, at least I still have the memories.

The progress i've made in the past few hours since the lovely miss pamagotchi posted the vocal accompaniment for the track. I still have a lot of fastidious work to do on the stereo image, so the vocals fit into the track properly. Also, the overall dynamics i must improve on, in order to lose some of the convoluted cacophony that make it hard to listen to. With that said, any input would be greatly appreciated. 

One of my songs. I hope you like it. Http://www.brianbarbermusic.com