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by gregvance8605 ago
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Thanks for the help! Here is the screenplay link http://v4.hitrecord.org/records/362099 Thanks so much for the help. Its a couple pages longer than what you recommended. Just tell me what you think or to go to hell either way constructive criticism is welcome.
by gregvance8605 ago
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LOGLINE:

A private investigator enlists the help of the mob, and hatches an elaborate ransom scenario in order to seek revenge on the people responsible for murdering his wife and child.

*This is the first couple of pages of a feature length screenplay. If you want to read on or have any ideas message me.*

INT. - HUGE GARAGE - MORNING

SHUFFLING of feet are heard.

Along with MUMBLED talking.

Sitting in a chair tied up a man sits, medium weight, mid-twenties wearing nothing but a black T-shirt, pants with no socks or shoes. This is MARK...

by gregvance8605 ago
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How would I go about posting one for people to view?