an experimentation series

sorry Day Glo i forgot to read of off the redux :/ i had some other takes but decided on uploading just the one for now.

also, the "ha" in this one is a bit contrived. might need another take :)

a tiny tune remix about snuggling made for love day

inspired by the themetafictionist's 'Bliss (blackout poetry)' RECord, i thought it would be fun to see what other poems could come out of tori's BLISS writing piece, so i came up with this here thing.

Please listen LOUDish and preferably with headphones. first pass @ this. i haven't done much with it except lay the separate audio tracks down and move them around a bit. i messed with the audio levels and balance slightly, but not with too much thought. i left the background music that pam had included in on her audio & you can hear the piano creep in at several moments. i actually like the effect in most instances (especially when the harmonica makes a guest appearance), but i think i need a little more depth in the various sounds so that it blends a bit more? i'm also thinking the ending could use something. maybe i just add in a ton of whisper tracks and fade out gradually? let me know if anyone has ideas or suggestions. i should mention that i am not a "music mixer" or composer (to be honest, i think i just about crashed my freeware audacity will all these tracks) but i am experimenting avant garde style and i am inspired to teach myself new ways of creating. i like the idea that you can't always hear the words clearly, but that your brain is picking them up regardless. <3

just an idea i was inspired to play with. i might still work on it a bit, we'll see....

i am what i look like to you

but i don't know what you see through

you are what you look like to me

but i'm not sure through what i see

going by the show of shows

my eyes do not seem to be those

to trust to be whose just and knows

how anybody's story goes

so it seems its up to me

to decide through what i see

as it seems it's up to you

to decide what you see through

so if you like i will agree

to be the he through whom you see

as long as i can count on you

to be the who that i see through

you are what i love to see

and i look pretty good to you

and everything looks good to me

when we are what i'm seeing through

~words by regularJOE

VO1 0:00 - 1:31 

VO2 1:33 - 3:01

*Seeking male voiceover to complete the tale!! Please reference the text REsource by saintmaker in the resources below :D*