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Hold Me Mother The Script
Mottelz Released May 27, 2014

Author's Note: Special thanks to kouralilly, SAM-urai, musing5225 and Christopher.Harn for helping with/looking over this.

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INT. HOSPITAL - EVENING

Blurry POV shot of a white hospital wall.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
The walls pure as a newborn babe,
But the tears block her view,
All she can do is smell.
Smell all the sad stories before
her,
She smells them everywhere that
doesn't smell sterile,
Everywhere they didn't get to yet.
She remembers,
When she was a little girl,
Her room felt like this one


INT. CHILD'S ROOM - NIGHT

A little girl is huddled on the floor, knees to chest.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
Too big
Too many corners
Filled with the unknown
On those nights
She'd crawl
Towards the light
The safety
And whisper
Please hold me,
Mother


INT. HOSPITAL - EVENING

POV is clearer now. We can tell it's a hospital room. A NURSE
enters wearing a grim look on her face. She has the stone
faced look of a sad proffesional.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
The look on the nurse's face makes
her wonder,
How anyone could think no news is
good news,
In the eyes beneath the mask that
is her face,
There is road weary empathy from a
woman,
Like an exhausted swimmer,
She no longer has the energy.
She remembers
The last time she saw a face like
that.


EXT. OUTSIDE - DAY

Still POV. The location doesn't really matter. Overlay
transition between the Nurse's face and a TEENAGE BOY's.
They're wearing the same expression. The Boy is talking but
it's inaudible.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
It was on a boy who knew best,
Whose eyes held empathy,
And whose mask,
Held the promise of never,
She remembers...

Shot of a TEENAGE GIRL, head in hands, runnign home.

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0. Alive
1. Mess
2. Brother
3. Haircut
4. Sister
5. Move
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7. Back
8. Friends
9. True
10. Bully
11. Discipline
12. Big
13. iPod
14. Asshole
15. Skip
16. Depression
17. Home
18. Retry
19....

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