It needs to be colored down to the original and maybe slowed down. 

(Decided to go with this idea more. Based off of the line about atoms and tiny stories. Used "At Last" by meaganmoore for finishing inspiration.)

The Electron asked the Nucleus...

"Do you think I could leave one day?"

The Neutron sighed with great apathy.

The Proton said...

"We're Positive!"

For the Electron had already left.