Here's a remix of Toss's "Archetype" Tiny Film. For this draft I cut it down and remixed in a dramatic hero/villain-type score by ozie as well as an alternative voice over.

I think this draft consists of many varied elements that don't necessarily come together to tell the story though. It feels a little all over the place, but I found it an interesting way to approach it nevertheless.

I'd love to hear everyone's thoughts and ideas: Does this arrangement work stylistically? Could the animation be reworked to fit into this structure? Does the voice over fit the character?