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This could be cool if you have two different people reading it. One person reads it all with another in the background reading what's highlighted.

<3 :) Mary

Love this. The first thing my eyes saw were "happiness that flows like an old movie around you" :)

I absolutely love this & I love how different it is from Rainey's, even though it's based on the same text. I really like how you chose to display it to with the highlights vs crossed out. I can't believe there hasn't been more blackout poetry on the site either. I'm really keen to have a go myself (I've never done it before). I just made a new collab for it - maybe that will inspire some more. Please will you add this to the collab? http://www.hitrecord.org/records/915913

Featured by: Jared (Producer)
Date: 9.8.12

Comment: I love this. Both pieces of writing are wonderful. And, I love the way you've laid this out graphically. Well done! I wonder if there's a way to make some sort of audio/visual representation of this?

holy schniekies! thanks so much everyone! <3
@themetafictionist, i agree completely! i love the idea of one piece of art having the life of many different pieces of art.... REMIX BABY! :-D

Cool! What's great about this piece - and tori's writing in general - is that there are so many possibilities within it. I was honestly surprised there wasn't more blackout poetry on hitrecord, given the remix nature of the craft and the huge amounts of wonderful writing on the site. It's a great way to remix all kinds of text, from excellent prose pieces like this, to other poems, and even more seemingly mundane things, like collaboration descriptions.