It made me so happy to know you approved - this is such a magnificent piece of art, that it matters deeply to me that you are content with the remix! Thank you <3
sfdetroiter thank you!:) Glad you like it! You're right...I was trying to think of a suitable title,but coudn't come up with anything but "whining".I did't really want to repeat "sorrow" or "sad",even if it would probably be closer to the point... I guess I'm not that good with words,i often think of a feeling or sound but can't find a word for it,although it most certainly exist.
I love the drawing. You've struck a wonderful balance between detail and simplicity (or even detail and blankness, the things that are left out).
I'm curious what connotations you intend "whining" to have. This image doesn't strike me as whining, but as deep sorrow (as the caption suggests). But maybe that's just due to my own connotations with "whining," which to me sounds pejorative.