lil' bit of Motown rhythm for your ears.
even made it a mono RECord, just like the ol' days

this was RECorded straight up raw in the empty tile-floor living room of the house I was moving out of in Orange County 2 years ago. all reverb you hear was the natural room ambience.

guitars, bass, drums/percussion - me

this could definitely use some words and melody. maybe even some extra instruments.
i had some trouble thinking of a bridge, because it would have made the song go past 3 minutes (big "no no" in Motown rules), but if you got suggestions re: structure just holler

i had an idea for a vocal melody, but i'd like to hear what someone can come up with.

ladies, think Diana Ross & Martha Reeves
fellas, think Smokey Robinson & David Ruffin 

0:00 - 0:15 ~ intro
0:16 - 0:42 ~ verse 1
0:43 - 0:57 ~ pre-chorus
0:58 - 1:13 ~ chorus
1:14 - 1:20 ~ (drum/bass break)
1:21 - 1:47 ~ verse 2
1:48 - 2:03 ~ pre-chorus
2:04 - 2:18 ~ chorus
2:19 - 2:41 ~ fade to end