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P1000033
by Day Glo
Released 2012-08-24 18:25:53 +0200
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Breakfast isn't like it used to be. I used to be able to take my time over breakfast. Go the whole hog, with bacon, eggs, toast, fruit. Really get a nice luxurious start to the day. Now I'm on duty a half hour earlier, and have to be ready to go within 10 minutes of the morning alarm. Barely time to grab a pastry on my way to the top deck.


It's not just the asteroids. They aren't the main problem, though they cause plenty of others. Just the other day we had a major pressure leak at the rear of the craft, caused by a rock the size of Spaghetti Junction scraping past at high speed. Took hours to patch up that one. Lost a few crew. Caught a lot of flak for that one. Told the command it wouldn't have happened if they'd let me sleep longer and get a decent breakfast, but did they care? Not one jot. Wrote me up and fined me a week's wages, they did.


Routines are important out here. We're a long way from home, you know, and it helps to have little reminders of Earth. Like breakfast. Breakfast is my "thing". Derek, my roommate, he works in engineering. He's got all the various gadgets and acoutrements that you'd need to keep a cat. Even has a litter tray under his bed that he empties every day. We've got not cat, of course. Against regulations. He just keeps the routine of keeping a cat. Seems a lot of effort, I reckon.


No, it's breakfast for me. Or it was, before my shift got changed. A croissant, some blackberry jam (if they've got it in the mess, raspberry if they haven't); or a Danish of some kind; even plain toast, if I must. But I gotta have something sweet to get the blood going in the morning. It's the most important meal of the day.

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  • Image
    I love your narrator's voice.
    2012-10-04 21:02:29 +0200
    by cassKAY
  • Me2
    I can't help but read this in my head with a cockney accent.
    2012-08-29 16:24:24 +0200
  • Mc%20portrait
    FEATURED BY: MattConley (Community Director)
    DATE: 8.29.12
    COMMENTS:
    This is a great example of what can result from each week's "10 Minute Writing Challenge" collaboration. This could be interpreted in so many ways. It could be a narration over footage of this character on a space mission or it could be a video transmission from an astronaut in the future to his family back home.

    This could be collaborated on in many ways: Illustrators could begin drawing the spaceship he is on, Writers could remix the text and add more to what Day Glo has begun here, or Voice Over Artists could start doing readings of the text so that Filmmakers/Animators could begin making a short film out of this.
    2012-08-29 07:58:44 +0200
  • P1000033
    Thanks guys!
    2012-08-28 21:05:00 +0200
    by Day Glo
  • Hitrecordwirrowsymbol
    great piece of writing
    2012-08-28 19:07:11 +0200
    by wirrow
  • Self_jpg
    I love this!! it's like reading a diary entry of someone from Bradbury's characters. Daily routine stuff on the spaceship.
    2012-08-24 18:55:16 +0200
    by MarieIv
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