Alright--so... I decided to step back and rework the begining so we get more an introduction with the main character. I took a few ideas that people had been tossing around for a while. I like this way better. I've taken out the monsters--they're for something else... entirely. Lol.
I've got this great idea that the main character will be swallowed up by the big face in the city. I'm thinking that a lot more of what I have here needs to be retouched to the point where you get the feeling that it's all digital or being powered by some machine. anyways, I'm thinking this will need another few days of flushing out this stuff... if not a week if we have time.
Do we have a due date?