Hey mate, I don't really know if you can private message on this site so i'll just send you a little comment. I'm absolutely loving your little tiny story, it fits brilliantly into an idea I have been toying with for a while with regards to a film. If you don't mind, i'd love to use your tiny story as part of the script? I'll credit you without any hesitation I just want to make sure your ok with it.
I've literally just signed up to this site, and this will be my first comment. I love the tiny story, though i'm no artist unfortunately. Still got me thinking about potential short films with this as the central component! Great stuff.