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Hitrecordportraittiles1
Released 2012-08-09 17:40:55 -0500
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If you get stranded and you stand on your own tonight


I won't be far behind, because I've been standing still for years


I've let the wind wash me clean and it sounds like light


Falling and ebbing away from the cornered shadows


Everything gets defined when we least need definition


The violins in my head are all playing for you


 


Under the humming there was a sound like no other


It was the vibration in our hands that made us weak


All our skin pulled tight by the cold and our bones


You could have pointed at the ocean and said "keep walking"


And I'd still be singing your praise on the ocean floor


 


If I could write a symphony and play it for you, I wouldn't


I'd keep it in a shoebox and let it turn yellow on the paper


My voice is nowhere clean enough to sing you a song


Both of my hands shake far too often to grace a piano


But I already told you how pretty you make things seem


And I think you smiled, but I'll never know for sure


 


The sun that reflects off your shoulders warms the earth


And the colors in the oil swirl before they drip into the sewer


I've watched the emptiness in me fill and recede so many times


I have a feeling this will be another set of teethmarks in my neck


That all this hope has gone to waste on another dark day


But what's the point of hope if not the risk that there isn't any left?


 


There are birds on the wires and they've become a choir


In these few last steps before I'm home, they played me off


They sang for a bitter, broken man in the blackest night


A song to guide him towards a light that never goes out


I hope when you feel this way, they'll sing for you too


 


I hope when all is said and done, there will always be a light

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    Beautiful piece! I wonder how it'd work with a VO & visuals.
    I see you've added this to one of Tori's 10-min challenge: so writing this poem took you only 10 minutes? You blow my mind sir! ;)
    2012-10-21 06:13:38 -0500
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    This was fantastic! I loved it!
    2012-08-13 20:53:44 -0500
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    this just killed me. soooo good!
    2012-08-13 13:51:43 -0500
    by emski
  • Fuacata
    I really enjoyed reading this piece :)
    2012-08-10 22:07:31 -0500
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    I am in love with this piece. Beautiful writing. My favorite lines are "You could have pointed at the ocean and said "keep walking" And I'd still be singing your praise on the ocean floor". I adore the title. <3 -Xan
    2012-08-10 19:18:45 -0500
    by xanlee
  • Hitrecordportraittiles1
    Why thank you, bellaarts.
    2012-08-10 11:28:08 -0500
  • Llll
    awesome, i love your writing
    2012-08-09 22:28:32 -0500
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