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Thanks ADH! =)

2012-08-14 20:11:15 -0300

by Vedder
@sinnamin: ;)

2012-08-14 15:39:34 -0300

by Vedder
@Todd: Thanks! I made the corrections! (turned out we BOTH misspelled "indelible")
Thank you, brujasur, & kellymarie for the hearts!! =)

2012-08-07 21:47:10 -0300

by Vedder
I like the line about the path that doesn't exist the most, but I like the whole thing too.

Some corrections for ya...

untangable should be intangible
undelable should be indelable.
unalienable should be inalienable

...wait - I meant to say that last one to John Adams, not you. Nevermind that last one.

2012-08-07 20:36:10 -0300

by todd68976
@TWL: What a great idea! I would LOVE hear the voices of HR collectively reading each line, or our talented voice-over kings/queens lending their voices to each line! Great idea!
Thank you, supriya, Joab, Gaby, William, Emma, Carole, MoN, Barush, Anne, & Saint for the love! =)

2012-08-07 20:23:27 -0300

by Vedder
grr message cut off...was going to say could see this working 2 ways either with just one person or a different person for each line. beautiful as always vedder

2012-08-07 18:42:25 -0300

by thewhitelady
i must say i really like this and could see it as a lil film.

2012-08-07 18:40:33 -0300

by thewhitelady
Shane: Have you read one of my older ones called "Angel of the Darkness"? It's my fave one that hasn't become a song yet! The rhyme and meter flow in a way given song than most of my works =)
Andrew: Thank you very much, I appreciate it!
Thanks rejjie, belcath, & andrew for the love already! =)

2012-08-07 14:03:49 -0300

by Vedder
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	I must become more than I am. I must become more than the sum of my parts. I must become a symbol, if not for myself but for others. I must allow myself to rise. I must reach for the intangible. I must collect that which does not exist and make it real. I must be broken so I am become whole. I must arise from the ashes to bring light to the darkness. I must become that which no one desires to be, so they may wish it. I must go on a path that does not exist so that it can. I must leave an indelible mark so that it never fades. I must become more. -V