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Released 2012-08-05 23:27:06 +0200

MWAHAHA.  Let's work on a moody spooky, jazzy, love-lost song.


Especially ELECTRIC GUITARISTS, KEYS PLAYERS, FEMALE VOCALISTS - come play!


Here's the breakdown, by section, of what the song is needing from you all:


ATMOSPHERIC INTRO (0:00 to 1:06)


        ELECTRIC GUITAR: There are 2 short but crucial points in this section in which I'd love for you to jump in (at :40 to :43 and at 1:00 to 1:07) .  You can reference the original guitar that filled these parts here www.hitrecord.org/records/147382.


      KEYS: Maybe begin to build subtle moods, hints at melodies.


      FEMALE VOCALS: Pepper it with haunting vocals, turn into a scatting ghost!  Play alongside my mouth trumpet at :28 to 1:03! 


      ANYONE: haunted sound effects, anything suitable -- get freaky in a sedated style.


 


1st VERSE (1:06 to 1:40), BRIDGE (1:41 to 2:06)


      ELECTRIC GUITAR:  Settle in and establish your groove (1:21 is a decent starting point).  You can reference the original guitar that filled these parts here (http://www.hitrecord.org/records/147382), it would be great if you tried to recreate that previous line, but put your own stamp on it through tone, pedal, etc.  Bridge is pretty open to play over.


      KEYS:  Expand the scope, possibly mimic some of the vocal melody lines.  Bridge is pretty open to play over.


      FEMALE VOCALS: This is the subtle introduction of the 2nd vocalist.  First off, once the verse begins and I start singing the background "we don't know" over and over at 1:07, harmonize with it.  This happens again with a crucial lil' climax at 1:41 and then again to intro the 2nd verse at 2:07. Secondly, there are some lines in here that you could harmonize with my vocals on...At 1:29: "Cuz I was. but then I found out you still care, what to do there?  I dunno".   Please reference the lyrics from the original resourced below and let me know if you need any help navigating my mumbly vocals!  


 


2nd VERSE (2:06 to 2:35) 


       ELECTRIC GUITAR:   Continue playing that previous line.  Any additional drama can be hinted at, but really restrain for the Ending Jam. 


       KEYS:  Possibly more of the same.  Some chords may be lovely! 


      FEMALE VOCALS:  at 2:06, after my "all the good people walk through me, sending me insane", the Female Vocalist gets spotlight and can respond to the male character's singing and lyrics.  My lyrics hint at the fact that I found out "you still care" but we're both wondering "what to do there?"  because "we don't know".  A bit of a romantic stalemate.  Whatever the interpretation, this is a chance to write some new stuff.  It should follow suit and be written in the 1st person "I" in response to the singer or "you".  Please reference the original lyrics/performance for this section if ya can (http://www.hitrecord.org/records/147382).  I think the end line would be a great one to double up on and is kind of the "hook" of the song:  "MY LOVE FOR YOU REMAINS"...menacing transition into the next section.


 


ENDING JAM: (2:35 OUT)


      ALL MUSICIANS:  Go off. There is a tempo change/feel shift that should allow you to take flight.  Imagine it is like in Ghostbusters and all those ghosts are getting released into the atmostphere from one of those little containers they trap them in.  Guitarists build up some feedback towards and ending climax.  The sax is removed to give you room to focus on the groove and do your thing, it is a strong element and may probably be worked back in (unless...).  feel free to check out the original track in the resources and use it for your reference track if that suits you.


 


       This should be a decent start, let me know if you should need anything else or have some suggestions!  A link to the ZIPPED STEMS stems is in the resources.




L Y R I C S:


Don't be scared of my love (scratched up) I don't know, I don't know why... we don't know, we don't know


1st verse You speak so freely like I'm not even there This guy that guy this guy that guy this guy over there It really ain't the fact that I wasn't prepared cuz I was then I found out you still cared What to do there?  I dunno  (we dunno) I'm still a boy (interchangeable with "I'm still in love")


2nd verse The laughter screams your name. All the good people walk through me, sending me insane Like I was Just a ghost. past tense and hollow but still a host of intense sentiments too hot to swallow. I'm opposed to this.   I miss ya miss. I bless bless you without the hachoo I spot you in a room and I'm posessed by a spirit to get nearer Flesh to flesh is transparent right now but it'll soon be apparent somehow my love for you remains


 


with hearty arty love and respect,


Evan

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  • Clip-2010-04-25_08_27_13_00816
    This reminds me of my love for Portishead's "Dummy".
    2012-12-12 05:14:45 +0100
  • 157701_100001214370615_317323621_n
    Haha no prob I understand :o]
    2012-08-09 23:45:52 +0200
  • Img_0166
    haha, thats awesome, don't let me deter that! I was just in a particularly sensitive/hyper aware place last night and wanted to clarify, thanks again to everyone for contributing. i've been mixing in stuff slowly and having a ton of fun
    2012-08-09 23:09:18 +0200
  • 157701_100001214370615_317323621_n
    Alright I will I got excited :o)
    2012-08-09 19:31:20 +0200
  • Img_0166
    also skappas and everyone, let me just take a step back. perhaps i've gotten ahead of myself -

    this is no longer "my song". so Skappas, if your tuba is contributed here and not used in a certain version I put together, it's not over. never IS over at HR. so i would encourage you to post things not just to please my version but do it for yourself and for others. the remix possibilities don't stop with this record.

    also, i realize i said "production belt" in my last post and that made me feel pretty damn lousy because I think it is misleading. I gotta slow down for a second....
    I just downloaded and unzipped probably close to 35 different records and started working them into this remix. That's some overwhelming shit. in more ways than one (fills my heart, flatters me, is just damn overwhelming to look at/listen to, intimidates me, etc.) All of these tracks I can't find it in my conscience to simply glaze over.

    Vivian - glad it connects to you somehow! But Please don't feel like you are rushed to add, we have no set deadline as of right now for this particular version. A spotlight is on this production right now, yes and I'm pumped. More diverse energies were focused on this record in 2 days than were EVER focused on it (and i got deep innit!), so I'm thankful to everyone involved and that definitely includes Matt and Dr. Gory. I just urge everyone interested to create something lovely, and if it requires practice/edits, take the necessary time for that. Higher quality records = higher quality records :)

    This rant is kind of a reaction/self-check from some wonderful, important, open discussion going on over here http://www.hitrecord.org/records/863396 regarding song requests. HitRecorders are speaking openly and passionately about something very dear and very current to them. I'd encourage you to check it out and participate if you have any input.

    feel free to just shut me out and record something dope!
    2012-08-09 08:51:23 +0200
  • 157701_100001214370615_317323621_n
    I'm going to sing to this.. this is perfect for me.. just let me scribble up some lyrics and ill record by tomorrow :o)
    2012-08-09 05:52:59 +0200
  • Img_0166
    skappas,
    i think your timing is impeccable and maybe not for what you think!
    re: your question...It all depends on how it comes out really, and whether or not it serves the song. If you have an idea of a direction you'd like to go, I'd say go!

    HOWEVER! I'd be more inclined to point you in the direction of "My Life is Shit Without You In It". I'm positive Dr. Gory was inquiring about tuba players to redo the bassline in the song to give it a fun, organic, bouncy feel. The most recent "request video" for the song can be found here : http://www.hitrecord.org/records/857729. that song is further on down the production belt so I'd say haul that tuba on over there!

    welcome to the site skappas! have a blast bouncing around!
    2012-08-09 04:43:42 +0200
  • User_default_thumb
    Would a tuba be an instrument that could be included in the end jam part?
    2012-08-09 04:02:18 +0200
    by skappas
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