I really like the way the text was written; their line weight is perfect. Can there be a little more line emphasis (make some of the lines darker to stand out) on some of the lines to increase the depth a little to emphasize how polar they are from each other?

This is so sweet!

This is wonderful

This is so lovely : )

That's "cos there aren't any!

I looked the story up on the Internet. I didn't see any results except for mine.

Good brain, great compliment really: that something is so great it sounds familar.

Nope. Came out of my brain as far as I can tell.