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Alicebunny
Released 2012-07-10 23:37:27 +0200
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The nannies ensured that sunblock was thoroughly applied, and then let their charges attack the playground with gusto, while they sat on the benches and chatted.  Their conversation ran its usual, tired course before settling on someone new.


 


“Oooh!  Who is that?  Haven’t seen him around before!”


 


“Him?  Oh, Kara.  You’re barking up the wrong tree.”


 


“What?  You think he’s gay?”


 


“No, I mean…look at the hair.  Don’t you think he’s a little…mechanical for you?”


 


“He is not!  Look at how he walks, look at the knees!  He’s totally human!”


 


“Oh my God, Kara!  That’s such a stereotype!  Cyborgs don’t really walk like that!”


 


“Some do.  My cousin works with a Cyborg, and he says it walks all stiff in the knees.”


 


“Well, the old models, yeah.  Not the newer ones.  Definitely not him.”


 


“Do you dare me to go talk to him?”


 


“NO!  I’m telling you, Kara, he’s a Cyborg!  You can just tell!”


 


“I’m so desperate, I might ask for his number anyway!”


 


Becca, who had been silent up until this point, spoke.


 


“What’s wrong with dating a Cyborg?”


 


A momentary silence was quickly followed by a cacophony of clarifications.


 


“Well, nothing, of course!”


 


“We’re not one of those human supremacists, or anything!  But…”


 


“They’re…y’know…”


 


“They’re just not like us.”


 


Becca did not look up, but continued to study her knees.

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  • Alicebunny
    Thank you for all of your hearts, hayling! They made my day :)
    2012-09-19 21:57:42 +0200
  • Alicebunny
    Thanks MacbethMayhem & rajasoup :)
    @AeB: Good call! Didn't think of that...
    2012-09-10 17:10:40 +0200
  • Sinnamin-987739
    You should add this to the outsider collab.
    2012-09-08 12:43:08 +0200
    by AeB
  • Alicebunny
    Thanks Symbiote!
    2012-09-03 17:27:33 +0200
  • Alicebunny
    Thank you so much Psalmist! It really means a lot :) You know, I wanted to indicate some sort of order, but didn't want to do chapters, for fear of discouraging people from remixing. I like the idea of using prompts...they seem like a good way to go. Thanks again! You really made my day :)
    2012-08-22 00:10:05 +0200
  • Psalmist portrait
    I hearted a number of your excerpts, but I chose this one to comment on b/c right now it feels like the beginning of the story. I still need to go back and read the very first RECords attached to this collab, but I probably won't get the chance to do that before the end of my lunch break. So I'm here now, lol.

    In case people begin reading here, I won't leave any "spoilers'. I do want to say that I really like the direction you've taken your portion of the story in. It's a great set up for generating a number of plot types and I'm interested in seeing where you decide to let it float to. Also, I want to congratulate you on the RECord publication format you're using (it's pretty difficult to get people to pay attention to text RECords on hitRECord, but you have your stuff at a length that peole will consider digestible). Wise of you ;) You may actually want to go ahead and add a prompt at the bottom of the RECords so people know what they might want to read next to go along with it (that could possibly get a few more views). At any rate, this is awesome and I'll keep an eye out to see what else you do with it! Hope other people give it a look as well!
    2012-08-21 18:52:20 +0200
  • Alicebunny
    Thanks Maggie & Rabid Schnauzer!
    @Rabid Schnauzer: Thank you for the compliment & your hearts! It really made my day :)
    2012-07-12 01:21:12 +0200
  • Img_2017
    Love this!
    2012-07-11 11:46:54 +0200
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