Just some minor vocal notes and EQ.
1) Metaphorest and "French" voicover could be brought up a bit.
2) Give the "snare" a litte "kiss" of treble more with some reverb.

Otherwise, it rocks Krrr.-Awesome.

Alyssa, I've taken your notes into consideration.

So you'd like to see seven A's in the hot damn? I currently only have six.

Krrr, here's my comments, take 'em or leave 'em. hope they help.
1. YES YESSSSSS THIS IS SO WICKED!
2. IN LOVE IN LOVE IN LOVE!
3. HOT DAAAAAAAMN!

If we're all in agreement:
1. Even out vocal levels
2. maybe some kind of extra element during the last build
3.???

If anyone has any other comments, speak up now while there's time!

Definite mtfb. Nice.

Krrr, this is incredible! I agree with the others about balance, but it is still awesome nonetheless.

Krr- this is falling beautifully on my ears- the only thing is perhaps the french could take a nudge upward. Those strings are lush <3

and my gut wants something more (hardehar) to be happening towards the end. feels like the climax doesn't hit yet, i guess.