This is fantastic! Do you think you could try maybe like 10-15 more takes with these notes in mind:
- Same reading volume as before - Feel free to sound a bit campy like it's a line from a B-Movie - The line's meant to be fun and enticing, so keep that as the main focus while reading it - Picture the person you're speaking the line to as having just entered a party that's gonna be insane (and they don't know it yet) so you're getting them ready for what's to come with the line - 10-15 takes is ideal, but feel free to try as many as you'd like (the more the merrier!)
- Same reading volume as before
- Feel free to sound a bit campy like it's a line from a B-Movie
- The line's meant to be fun and enticing, so keep that as the main focus while reading it
- Picture the person you're speaking the line to as having just entered a party that's gonna be insane (and they don't know it yet) so you're getting them ready for what's to come with the line
- 10-15 takes is ideal, but feel free to try as many as you'd like (the more the merrier!)
Thanks so much!