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The Duet - a tiny story
by tootwofoursquare
Released 2012-05-04 07:05:48 +0200
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my head and my heart hardly ever agree...


when one argues, the other resigns. 


when one cries the other is bounless with joy,


when one's lewd, the other's refined. 


i wonder why i need them both,


the odd couple, a confusing duet...


when one says "Because I will remember"


"what I will eventually forget."

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  • Menkeevs
    thank you for the heart, DianeFT - I hope someone is able to remix this :D!
    2012-05-04 17:15:52 +0200
    by tootwofoursquare
  • Menkeevs
    i was hoping for a lot of ambiguity about who was saying each of the last two lines - please revise or remix if you think you can create more recognizable ambiguity. thanks!
    2012-05-04 07:10:25 +0200
    by tootwofoursquare
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