If I had to pick one of my tiny stories that I'd personally love to see more people vamp on (some of my others have had a bit more) it'd probably be this one.
Thanks Matt! Yeah, I like its potential, too. It's one of those things which hit really quick. I've got a few ideas for revising and remixing. I feel like there's a version of this that's a four line rhyming verse, maybe with something like "attends" or "again" replacing or added after "continues"... Ah, it's on the tip of my tongue! Here's hoping others will pick through it and dissect it, too!
"The middle" is such an interesting concept, and the way you introduce the theme of time in these few words could be remixed in many ways. I wonder where else this Tiny Story could go. Great job on this!
