I was inspired by the line saying "In a very veracious attempt of forgive to forget he expressed his love for her"... and thought it would be interesting if we added in a girl's voice saying something like:
"In an assertive attack of it's over and done, she described her bitter feelings toward him"
followed by lyrics sung by a girl like:
He says things will change, but we had our day in the sun
The battle it raged, neither one of us has won
Nothing left to say, no page has gone unturned.
He left me in the flames, and alone there I will burn
Ashes to ashes, Ive fallen into pieces
Crumbling down with all his excuses
Its plain and simple,The truth has been unearthed
the lies add up to more than he’s worth
there's no sense standing here, when I don’t know what Im waiting for
all I have left to do is Walk right out that door. ..
Then that quote "in a very veracious attempt" is said and lyrics from the male perspective can follow.
Just an Idea! :)