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by tori
Released 2010-03-15 17:13:49 -0500
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Here is where, Amazonian, I pin your tongue down with a surgeon's precision,


and so begins the lexical dissection of our encounters,


ripping you page by page by page, mopping up each etymological morsel


with an inquisitive compulsion - a quest to uncover passion out of plain sight,


but your ambiguous talk is merely a string of indifferent words.


 


& here is where, choked, I release you.


 


Steriled & savage, I pull Occam's razor across my skin like a scalpel & crack open my chest.


Here is where I soak the ragged end of a white cloth with rapture & hurl my molotov heart.


 


& here is where the glassy realisation has to fall,


where something shatters but it isn't silence.

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  • Muppies
    Vivid! Absolutely fantastic.
    2012-07-17 21:50:51 -0500
    by mckee21
  • 303032_372374792881800_574967898_n
    sophisticated vocabulary, spent some time with a dictionary, read it again, fucking awesome ! kudos!
    2012-07-16 16:28:17 -0500
  • Mc portrait
    FEATURED BY: MattConley (Community Director)
    DATE: 7.16.12
    COMMENTS:
    This is a really visceral piece of writing from tori. It stays with you and lingers long after you're done reading it.

    This would be a great text to see laid out by a graphic designer and illustrators could begin to develop the characters and imagery to set a mood.

    A really great place to begin is with a series of DRAMATIC READINGS. Those could really set the tone for the writing and help establish where to go next. Who's up for doing some readings of this record?
    2012-07-16 09:35:35 -0500
  • Img_1511
    ohhh, these beautiful old gems...
    2012-07-13 03:23:47 -0500
  • Me
    Oh, you make me blush sometimes. ^_^
    Merciiiii. <3
    2012-07-12 17:56:46 -0500
    by tori
  • Irmav3
    I read this on my phone, and my hands are shaking! You "Plath" of my heart, you... <3
    2012-07-12 12:03:05 -0500
    by IrmaVep
  • Tn_1312608855503
    wow i love this! as damsel said, delicious words! :)
    2010-11-28 10:34:52 -0600
    by layla
  • Sdc10137adjusted
    Thrilling is a great word. Thats totally how it felt! My tongue is getting tingly just thinking about it!
    2010-03-25 06:07:45 -0500
    by Damsel
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