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Jasonangelone-1311180
The floor and the ceiling
by Joab Nevo
Released 2011-11-17 16:52:44 +0200
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The floor, it so envied that all-mighty ceiling,
Unburdened above - it looked so damn appealing!
Never stepped on or bothered, just observing it all,
"So smug, and superior, making me feel so small".


What the floor didn't realize, and would never have guessed,
Was that the ceiling, it thought that the floor had it best.
Getting stepped on, acknowledged, (and constantly washed),
"I am merely observing, but the floor - it is touched".

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  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    @svirlee I thank you for your kind words, kind sir :) And I thank you for your hearts, Soraya, Harp, Kristopher, Kelly & Jordan x
    2013-05-13 20:24:48 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
  • Ilia
    This is incredibly clever, well written and thematically rich. My applause!
    2013-05-13 06:56:36 +0200
    by svirlee
  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    Thanks for the hearts, Elisabet & Nostalgia!
    2013-04-18 22:07:11 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    Thanks for the heart, Murker x
    2013-04-12 01:22:40 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    Thanks for the heart, Alice!
    2013-04-11 15:28:10 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    Thanks for the heart, AllisonJ!
    2013-04-10 15:18:32 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
  • Sammy4
    :) It's amazing how im thoroughly entertained just by going through your albums...consistently good!!!! um i mean grrrrreat!
    2013-04-09 22:55:11 +0200
    by Samvasquez00
  • Jasonangelone-1311180
    Thanks, Sam <3
    2013-04-09 22:32:01 +0200
    by Joab Nevo
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