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People Who Hate People [2nd draft]
by Day Glo
Released 2011-09-09 15:05:27 +0100

A second draft of the screenplay by myself & Phen. After the advice on the previous draft, especially from Lawrie, I cut a couple of scenes and slightly restructured it. Also did a bit of a dialogue overhaul to cut down on unnecessary swears. I do think this is better than the initial draft, but as ever, let us know.


Thanks for reading.

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  • P1000033
    Thanks, suzyrene, I'd love to see what you do with it.
    2011-09-20 23:27:18 +0100
    by Day Glo
  • Scan0036
    I think it's a very good ending for a short film - I'd call it the "twist", that's how we say in French.. Would love to try to shoot a first draft of it when I have time and available friends !
    2011-09-20 23:20:04 +0100
    by suzyrene
  • Snapshot_20130303_1
    I just realized (it's almost midnight) that the lack of a clear ending in this reminds me of that scene in The Brothers Bloom when Penelope shows Bloom her collection of hobbies.
    2011-09-14 03:16:27 +0100
    by deeasherself
  • P1000033
    Yo, yo, yo. Thanks for the support guys.
    2011-09-13 11:56:38 +0100
    by Day Glo
  • Wherethehotboysat
    <3
    2011-09-09 15:24:01 +0100
    by phenomenaaa
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