I see what you mean about the spoiler. I had to have a look and saw the Hip Hop Collection. For me tho this added, I was just waiting for it to kick in.
Great tune.

Thanks for the feature Sabine! I think the feedback collab is a great idea and I hope to see more people contribute there records and feedback to it.

Thanks for all the recommendations & kind words everyone!

For some reasons I kept getting an error whenever I tried to feature this in the collab... It finally worked. I'll feature each submission for a few days... rotate... Maybe others feel like giving additional feedback that way. Anyway...

:-)

This was hot I like it!

*Record Spoiler*

@OhPattyG - I was thinking about adding someone singing but I decided to go with a single verse in the middle because I think it comes off as kind of a surprise to first time you listen to it. Instruments are kind of my thing and when a flow comes in so late I don't think people are really expecting it. At least thats what I hope. I know its no huge deal and that I don't need to put up spoiler alerts, but I think unexpected surprises help create a larger impact.

*Disclaimer: I know nothing about Hip-Hop. And I mean NOTHING

But I LOVE this and was thinking "wouldn't it be super awesome if the beginning had a ninety's style crooning diva belting a sultry chorus?"

*looks at two tarnished little cents falling to bottom of feedback box :)

Thanks for the hearts Lawrie & Elspeth! I'm glad you dig this one.

Thanks for the hearts guys. I'll really like how this one turned out.