Here's a mock-up of one way to illustrate "Shady Shadow: TIny Story."

I like the overall arrangement and the characters (so far.) The text and the quote bubble could use some work (i.e. better placement and style.)

Perhaps the character has a prop or two (a briefcase with money leaking out of it a bit, or something suggestive of theft or whatever.)

The gun the shadow is holding could use some work too (looks like he is pointing as it's drawn now.)

Basically this is a rough sketch just to play around with if anyone's interested...