This is another conceptual sketch for the "lesson learned" project. the character in the background looks awfuly cartoony. i would probly make him look more gritty and horrific. and make the girl have a fuller body composition.
Im thinking the first scene will be when she makes the "choice" in the given context of surroundings. it blacks into a darker metaphoriclal scene, somwhat expressed in this drawing. she goes on a shore journey in which she witness the vacum cleaner and computers being harrased by snake like extention cords. its starts off slow then it becomes more complex. The cords tie them up. the electic box comes over menecingly and a giant arm pulls them inside. at that moment the box appears to lose its electronic aura. and all the arms are rawn in. slight sparks from inside leads the girl over. the girl, curious. wanders in one of the holes. (its like a dream) she walks through a slightly diferent environment and witness the a scen like the one expressed in the first conceptual drawing. she sees an electrionic being hovering above everything. at that moment she snaps back to reality. and reacts to the computer being crashed. maybe in a subtle way, like "ah come on" you gotta be kidding me" but somway expressing her anguish.
the shots would be close face shots, distant shots in which she stand in front of a large point of veiw. Shots that focus on parts of her body. as she steps over chords ext. She has a comfortable but curious walk, like waking up i the middle of the nght.
darkness for the outside, while white while inside the electric box.
A focus on silence and her breathing. loud electric sounds for shots that are close to the box.
I think this can really work out. these are just some thoughts. let me know if anything.
and i noticed you kept adressing sombody named lisa. i know that one of my drawings was entitled lisa. but thats not me though.