I took Kavonne's tiny story down a dark alley. I hope you don't mind Kavonne.

I have three requests:

1. I'm pretty uncertain about the wording. Would "Something didn't add up in Numberland" be better? Something else?

2. I'm going to upload a sketch of an alternate version of this picture which creates an investigation scene. Which do you prefer? Should I do a final of the csi version? Yes, the sketch is on a post-it note.

3. Could someone please do a noir-style shading of this?