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Cafe%20coffee
Released 2011-05-15 15:04:39 -0700
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Sunday,


You are the little apocalypse
in every week
The small death
set to the scent of roast dinner


You are the worst day
for worriers


Scholars and sloggers
sport sick stomachs
feeling five days’ weight
on slumped shoulders
pre-playing the pitfalls ahead


Forward lookers fret
while backward glancers
count missed chances
in their weekend window


Sunday,


Where the present-dwellers
lounge in slippered feet
whiskey-sipping, daytripping,
relaxing, basking
in a day of rest


While the rest of us
grimace in the vice
Stuck tight between
wasted time and
the production line -
the treadmill
and the trampoline
That it’s now too late
to jump on


Sunday,


you are the nostalgic dread
the post-pubescent hangover
the associations accrued,
Pavlovian,
over decades


You are the ominous opposite
of Friday night
morbid mother of the septet


You are the heinous host
of that deep down dread

that says:


‘it’s time for bed’

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  • Dsc02009
    Metaphorist, I've been reading through short stories on here, but your stories are the only ones that have caught my eye. Great job!
    2013-05-26 12:38:45 -0700
  • Img_4638
    This is exactly how I feel about Sunday :D
    2012-10-04 15:47:52 -0700
    by susurro
  • Cafe%20coffee
    Oh wow thanks so much Tori! I'll have a go at some other days too :) And thanks Kelly! Even though I don't really work Monday to Friday anymore I still get the residual Sunday blues too.
    2012-09-15 11:38:56 -0700
  • Kelly%20hangin
    Wow, this is literally how I feel every Sunday night. Perfectomundo Sarah :)
    2012-09-15 11:18:58 -0700
  • Me
    FEATURED by: Tori
    DATE: 15th September 2012

    COMMENT: What I love about this poem most is that all the situations & feelings discussed in it are so universal. I think we can all relate to those Sunday blues. It's a great example of the kind of RECords I think would fit best into the Days & Ends collab - choosing a day and really getting to grips with the common things we feel & shared experiences we have specifically on that day.

    This is also a fantastic poem to read out loud - I imagine it becoming a voiceover for a short film perhaps, a melancholy but tongue-in-cheek lament to the end of the weekend. There are a couple of readings of this poem already, but I'd love to hear more. Perhaps it would be good to have a mixture of voices reading this out to emphasise the shared experience.
    2012-09-15 03:59:23 -0700
    by tori
  • Soft-serve2
    Ms. Daly, I shall never understand how you can spin such things as Sundays into a magnificent tale that captivates everyone who sets eyes on it. You, wonderful lady, are made of magic & stars & all things wonderful! I would write this on any RECord you create, but I can relate to this one so much right now ;]
    <3
    2011-05-16 07:41:23 -0700
  • Jawdens_pics221
    I hate sunday a little more now, but with a better vocabulary. Awesome job :)
    2011-05-16 05:26:54 -0700
  • Cafe%20coffee
    Aww Amy thanks so much!! Dusty, Bloemy and AeB glad you relate - or perhaps sorry that you do :)
    2011-05-15 20:21:40 -0700
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