short story

I've been thinking, we all talk about the inner beauty, but what about those people how don't apreciate their look, I mean low self-esteem.
So i think that an idea could de a short story about a beautiful special girl how has low self-esteem.

her name is Soleil (pronounced Solay)It means sun in French. She's a beautiful simple girl, who likes littles thing of life such as how the sky chages throughout the day, how trees move because of the air, how a person can tell a story keeping everyone entertained, colors, pencils, textures, flavors and many other details of life.
It starts when she was becoming a teenager, she was one of the popular type of person, but as we all know, at that age everyone is serching for party, boys, in general new experiences (drinking, smoking maybe drugs who knows)and Soleil been such a special person, didn't wanted to proceed with this lifestyle.
She was slowly running out of his old friends and that hurt her deeply inside and as

it had for most of her life, she blamed herself.

(talking alone)
Soleil: I'm such a stupid person, it always happend the same thing! anybody likes me, of course! who wants to be with an ugly silly girl!

yes, she was alone. But she was most of the beautiful girls of the country, maybe the planet.
She grows up, and become (as we all call) a nerd.(and which this I mean she worried a little bit too much about her grades, she didn't go out with friends or partying, I guess she prefered to have her own world)


I made this and I think it's OK, but maybe transform it into images would be great,

Tell me what you think about this and sorry If I misspelled something
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