Oh yes, you're right, ManWithHat - the video as a whole is somewhat sketchy, a 'let's see what I can do with all this material' -kind of thing. First of all, it's still too short for a two-part film. Secondly, I would have (in my dreams) liked to remix the desk drum beat together with the Burn on -material, but, since I really really suck at remixing music, I didn't. Perhaps someone else might be interested in trying that.

I like a lot of the imagery and the sound you've combined here, but at the moment, it seems a bit disjointed and disconnected. Some kind of through-line would be helpful, whether it be one song or something like that.