never saw this version, really well played. and so different to the version Lawrie did...

Hey McEvoy! Great to see you here! This place is infectious isn't it? :)

I absolutely loved your performance so thank you so much for interpreting my words so beautifully.

Ooh I'd love to see some illustrations or animations of the 'train incident'...be cool to intercut those with your bits...and ah thats a shame crashandburn hasn't brought her response over - I'll keep an eye out for it!

Thanks slo mo for this introduction to HitRecord. And thanks for a marvelous little monologue metaphorest. It was great to work with. I was tempted to play with the comedy of the piece more but I think in the end I'm glad we didn't (good advice slo mo!).

Now I've met John and felt the presence of Laura, I want to know more of the story. I'd love to see what happened that Tuesday on the train. And I'm aching to read crashburn's 'Laura response' but it doesn't seem to be here on V4 yet.

Thanks for the fantastic feedback everyone.

Although I can't take too much credit - it's all in the script and the guy in the video is my super talented husband (yes biased!!).

It's intentionally a very raw clip. We'd love to see it remixed - music, animation or other visual elements. Another thought we had, is perhaps this scene could be part of a longer story (for example crashandburn's response from Laura).

Good work Sir, The Dialogue was creative

Awesome natural performance there bro, really well done - loved it mate! Good for you!!!

Oh I meant to say too how cool it it to now have two very different interpretations of the exact same dialogue (this version and lawrie brewster's http://www.hitrecord.org/records/17721) - I love both but they are SO different!

This is one of the things I love most about this site - so many awesome, varied, exciting possibilities.

I wonder if someone can do crashandburn's reply monologue from Laura? That would be too cool!

My goodness! What a performance! Thank you so much for doing this - I'm so so impressed. A very natural, authentic, powerful delivery.

<3!!