again...very good! when to we collab? oh and my email is bryandrewyor@gmail.com ...whats up with featuring a record...should I wait to feature my record or does it matter...this site is kinda confusing.
anyways, great work! Peace!

Thanks Bryan! Most of the footage is of northern California from another hitRECorder. You can see all the resources I used below the record if you want to check them out. I actually stared a collaboration to remix the video, so if your interested you can find it there as well..

I'm down to collaborate on a track anytime. If you ever want some stems to one of my records just let me know, however I no longer have access to some of the older records I made.

Wow...now this is really cool man! I record on logic and I have a lot of experience as a multi-instrumentalist and vocalist/ singer-songwriter... I would love to collaborate with your work. I just joined HitRecord a couple days ago and haven't collaborated yet...Wow, again, this is really good! Is this in Nv? Hope to work with you soon...peace
p.s. the keyboard wasn't plugged in...I went back and recorded new audio through logic and IMovie

@Rio Finn I like the remix on the story. You should record it as a text record and add it to the collaboration. That way more people will see it and possibly remix some more. Which I think I might take a stab at.

So, I expanded on the poem. I want to use this as maybe dialogue, voiceover in the script I want to write for it. I hope I did it justice.


The shadows that surround me reflect the past.

As the arrow of time propels me through space.

Everything I leave falls into the disordered state.

I depart this realm.


I am just the sand that does spirals around my thighs,

The fractals, prisms flitting beneath the imprisoning sun.

I am veiled by the darkness that follow me,

For I will not be seen. Consciousness is forgotten.


I am alone, the wind reminds me,

Running her cold blade along my naked paper skin.

As the sun sits like a King on his thrown,

Sinking behind the plain.


Always running from whispers in the night.

I walk through the narrow wood,

For the shadows live there, beneath their tattered carpets.

I am never home, always lost.


I don’t fear god, or the demons, or my shallow grave below.

I fear myself, more than I fear those masked people

Living in their damned city.

I fear my hands and what they have done.

Voices pierce my ears,

Which meaning has faded away over time along with my tired body,

From loneliness and self-degradation.


I travel through space and time and back again,

Through the eye of the sun and its speckled iris ablaze in me.

Faster then light travel, yet the shadows still cast

Their cold hand upon me.


I close my eyes, weighed down by sand bags of soot, crusting over.

White milky light ebbing through, filling up everything:

I step into the macrocosm.

I close my fist, resting the machine that has hurt and created so many things:

I burst into the microcosm.

I depart this realm.

I'm Glad you agree, Malicore. I will write more to this, I will get back to you.

Rio Finn posted a comment about the collab for this video on another record and I thought this would be the best place (for now) to continue the conversation. I'll quote his comment here and follow it up with my response.


Rio Finns Comment:
"I don't know why, but I couldn't get the remark bar to work on you Time Traveler Collaboration, so I will just leave it here.

So, I read the original piece and I LOVE IT! Now, the piece is great on its own, but it would be kind of interesting if we wrote more to it and made it into a larger short film. I think we should keep it in the kind of poetic language it is originally in, but, maybe if we dived into the loneliness I felt from the piece. Make the shadows of his past into some kind of visual metaphor of how his past is always haunting him. Because the shadows represent the fears of our past which everyone has, it is beautiful how you name these fears, almost give them a character in the piece. I love it, and I think we could do more with it, and make it into a really cool short film. I just wanted to run this by you, before we remix it to talk about the piece a bit more, to explore some places where this could go."


@Rio I agree that the story can be expanded upon because it doesn't necessarily have to be "tiny". If you would like to rewrite the story please do so, because it's really not my expertise. I like the idea of shadows being a character on their own and how they represent the intangible aspects of the protagonist's life. Shadows are casted by light and our lead character travels faster than light, so this is the reason why they have this disconnect. The protagonist is alone on their adventure. They have no companions or loved ones. They feel completely detached from the world but accept their fate. So please go ahead and rewrite, expand, or remix. Whatever you like! I would really like to see this taken further.

You were right, it worked. So, respond when ever you get the chance.