Desk Drum Circle for Songwriters

I imposed a traditional song structure on the drumming and added pieces of Will's beautiful "living safe of tired"

I slowed this down to 102 BPM.
Lyrics? Melody? Instrumentation?
It's got a really typical structure: A 4 bar into, and then space for 2 verses, a chorus, another verse, then the chorus again, and several bars at the end to go out on.