Foray into messing with loops in garageband

So this is very messy and unfinished - Ive got no idea if this works - never made a song using loops before. If you think you can add/remove stuff and improve this please do! I don't really know what I'm doing. I can send separate tracks if you need em!

Also I set out to make something along the lines of Portishead/Joanna Newsom/Massive attack but I think I might be ripping some of them off inadvertently - do let me know if it's TOO like something.

Lyrics:

Molasses thick, sugar slick
These metaphores less than perfect
Your words penetrate me like an arrow
But the sharp end is facing back at you

Volcanic rock, I am built
On shifting layers of silt
Older than the Earth and harder than its core
I'll leave you wanting more...