ATTENTION:
to all those of you who are being so kind as to remix this, please use this new version.
i re-recorded it in Am. It's still in 94bpm and i added a 3rd harmony to the 2nd verse.
i also used a real microphone as opposed to the built in mic that's on my computer. i think it's much cleaner and i hope i didn't upset anyone =(
i can be a bit of a perfectionist. sigh.

please help a damsel in distress! =)
i'm looking for some instrumentation. i hear (real violin, not synth please) violin, guitar, bass and drums but anything is welcome.
this is obviously very rough, i used minimal reverb, and i didn't auto tune anything so sadly it's a little flat in some places but i can fix that stuff later.
let me know if you need a click track =)
if you need inspiration my influences include:
bat for lashes
beachouse
goldfrapp (older stuff)
blonde redhead
radiohead
portisehead...obviously, i love head.

lyrics are:

i was born on the 3rd of june into a broken family
where words were used as weapons
and love was a bended knee
the genesis of bliss came early for me
they tried to strike if from my bones
but i was already free

now i'm half a person and everybody knows it
that's why i have no real friends and no enemies
what's the use in wasting precious energy on
loving or hating someone like me

i was born to be a fool and
not follow rules set to me
and my words are used as weapons
and my love is a history
the genesis of truth came early to me
and my heart feels no pain
like the pang of reality

now i'm half a person and everybody knows it
that's why i have no real friends and no enemies
what's the use in wasting precious energy on
loving or hating someone like me

i know i could have been great
a real beacon of light
to all those love lorn passengers
of ships passing in the night