Mign
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This would end differently – I know it’s a dream in the first place.


I am behind a door. The room is pitch black. I feel nothing behind me but space and hear nothing but the whispers to not look back, so I don’t. Instead I keep my eyes on the bright outline of this door. I see the shadow cast when someone stands on the other side and leaves.


It is quiet on the other side. I turn the knob, push the door, and look out into a familiar room. There is a girl sitting on the floor with her back towards me.


“They won’t get you here,” she says.


I nod but I don’t know what she’s talking about. I walk towards her to face her but find myself walking back into place. I train my eyes on the back of her head and try again until the door I came through is in front of me. All I see the entire time is her back. I feel my hair raise and my skin prickle.


“It’s safe here,” she continues.


Ignoring her, I rush to the door.


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“You can think and think and think yourself to death here,” they chorus.


I wake up and remember why I sleep in a room with no doors.


 


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Note: Sudden unexpected nocturnal death syndrome (SUNDS), known in the Philippines as "bangungot" is (drum roll please) sudden unexpected death, usually during sleep. A "bangungot" is also the Tagalog word for nightmare.

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  • Mign
    Thanks for the love and for reading! Special shoutout to Julz (Bubbabuster). <3 Thank you, @Andrei. Glad to scare/freak you out. :)
  • Andreidoublej-1448739
    So well done, I got chills reading this.
  • Julz
    I agree with Xanlee and Christopher, though my comment is 5 months too late. This deserves more hearts!

    Bangungot indeed, worst ever! =]
  • Mign
    Thanks for reading this and also for the hearts, Xan, Saint, Halfreal and Christopher! <3
  • Xanlee-1479146
    How has nobody hearted this yet? This is so awesome.
    by xanlee
  • Xanlee-1479146
    p.s. Brilliant title
    by xanlee
  • Minidynz-1555926
    Xanlee is spot on. This needs way more hearts, what with it being absolutely amazing and all.
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