I'm not really good at writing screenplays haha. But here are the first couple of minutes for DELETED. I'm still going to make some changes but I just want to know what you guys think. I have a new character but I haven't really named her yet.
Desmond suffered amnesia from an accident that happened a long time ago. He's been trying to remember things ever since but nothing really seems to work out for him. He then meets Rachel from NYC in a Skype call. Rachel has history with Desmond long time ago before he lost most of his memories. Everytime Desmond sees Rachel, he gets flashbacks and he starts to remember things like a puzzle. Rachel is one of the only ways the he can remember things. He then falls in love with Rachel, but what he doesn't know is the painful past that lies ahead of him and it gets difficult for him as he progresses through his memories.
"The reason people find it hard to be happy is that they always see the past better than it was, the present worst than it is, and the future less resolved than it will be" -Marcel Pagnol
LIBRARY FOUNTAIN - DAY
Desmond sitting on a bench alone for a few seconds. Camera facing the back of the bench.
Close in to the side of his face (Camera on the left side of the bench)
Suddenly hears a voice before cutting to the next scene
(Someone): So how are you doing?
ROOM - DAY
Camera facing the person who said the line then switches to Desmond’s side.
(Desmond): I’m fine
(Desmond): *Thinking* Pretty sure *laughs*
(Someone): Any rage? Depression? ... Any?
(Desmond): No, I’m fine.. It’s been a good...