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forever (tiny story reverse haiku)
by via
Released 2010-07-20 03:45:22 +0200
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jvv's tiny story as a haiku (tho i reversed the 5-7-5 order by mistake!):

two wrinkled hands together
frail lips meet to kiss
love that can last a lifetime
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  • Scan0047
    haha, motiveZ, you're absolutely right! ah well, it just came out that way....

    you should add a title to your comment, i think that will let it show up as its own record, and that way others will find it on your page of contributions. at least i hope it will work, cuz yours is very lovely!
    2010-07-29 03:48:26 +0200
    by via
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    i'm pretty sure haiku is 5-7-5, not 7-5-7

    i REmixed it some, hope you don't mind

    frail hands together
    young love can last a lifetime
    lips still meet to kiss
    2010-07-29 01:15:08 +0200
    by motiveZ
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