I've split the scenes into chapters! Righto, basically the action consists of our terrifying would be serial killer reading a child's fairy tale. Sitting out in the garden - you can see the actual visual for the scene here!
http://www.hitrecord.org/records/98056

CHATPER ONE

One day the fox succeeded in catching a fine
fat goose asleep in a garden,

He bit on her wing dragging her down then
hissed and cackled.

'Why my pretty, In the morning sun I will
strip your flesh to the bone.

Mothers watched from afar, ignoring her cry
staring lost in far away windows

She was seen and heard screaming
in the flowers then found next day.

Wings clipped. Head gone.

The fox had escaped and in his lair
he laughed foolishly, while his bedroom
door remained unlocked.

So one night a jealous cat did come
and prowl. It went to work inside,
with net and wire.

it said to the fox, beautiful killer,

Your meat tastes sweetest of all...

Now that 'length' is what we have to play with - im basically just putting it out there. Im posting the rest of the 'script so far' and am inviting writers to take a look, put in some ideas, suggestions! Eventually I will be inviting voice over artists too once we get a final draft!