i just started working on an animation for the space collab of a poem i wrote a little while ago..

i often begin projects and lose interest, never finishing them, so i figured that posting what i have so far would force me to actually get this done.

this is my first time attempting animation, and i've been drawing each frame by hand (tracing stills from a poor-quality video i took for reference) even though it's only 5 seconds long so far, i would love to hear some feedback.

it would also be great for someone to do a reading of the poem so i can add it to the video when i finish!

the children made fun of her

for her skin was too bright

so she soaked her body in ink

and called herself Night

but every so often

her imperfections shined through

creating stars in the sky

and the most beautiful

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feel free to edit the poem however you like! it has plenty room for improvement :)

thanks <3

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