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When she died, they took her things: necklace, watch & silver rings. They slid them off with expertise, then took her wallet, phone & keys.
They put them in a plastic tray, with her book & body spray, a pen, a comb, her fake ID, a pin badge labelled "shop trainee".
They wiped down all the bloody splatters, then folded up her shattered glasses. They tucked them in a scrumpled note, complete with David Bowie quote.
They found a lighter in her jeans, lipstick, pot and jelly beans. Last they found the dog-eared letter, "My death will make your lives much better." |
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I haven't had much time to be on the site lately, but I finally had time for a catch up this evening and couldn't believe how far my poem "Her Pockets" had come since I was last on.
If you haven't found these gems yet, please listen to:
Riana's fantastic reading: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155350
Caty P's beautiful song: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155598
Todd68976's song additions: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/156134
Let's polish up the song, have some more vocal additions & then... make a video? I am completely amazed at how wonderful this is becoming. I never imagined my words could sound this good - thank you Riana, Caty & Todd! :)
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If you haven't found these gems yet, please listen to:
Riana's fantastic reading: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155350
Caty P's beautiful song: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155598
Todd68976's song additions: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/156134
Let's polish up the song, have some more vocal additions & then... make a video? I am completely amazed at how wonderful this is becoming. I never imagined my words could sound this good - thank you Riana, Caty & Todd! :)
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