When she died, they took her things:
necklace, watch & silver rings.
They slid them off with expertise,
then took her wallet, phone & keys.
They put them in a plastic tray,
with her book & body spray,
a pen, a comb, her fake ID,
a pin badge labelled "shop trainee".
They wiped down all the bloody splatters,
then folded up her shattered glasses.
They tucked them in a scrumpled note,
complete with David Bowie quote.
They found a lighter in her jeans,
lipstick, pot and jelly beans.
Last they found the dog-eared letter,
"My death will make your lives much better."
If you haven't found these gems yet, please listen to:
Riana's fantastic reading: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155350
Caty P's beautiful song: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/155598
Todd68976's song additions: http://www.hitrecord.org/records/156134
Let's polish up the song, have some more vocal additions & then... make a video? I am completely amazed at how wonderful this is becoming. I never imagined my words could sound this good - thank you Riana, Caty & Todd! :)