this is a song a song a song i made :D

Here is a updated version of the DNA Chords remix featuring pamagotchi & kidcubicle on vocals.

the innocent smiles she wore as a child have been replaced

by difficult scenes reenacted in dreams she thought she'd forgotten

the difference between us is the chemicals that make us hungry for something more

the heartbreak we promised wouldn't come around is sleeping in our bed

something is watching from the window

it knows what you're afraid of

i can feel its breath on my neck

and the laughter echoes through the halls

i'm not coming back.

i need my space.

she says i wasn't around enough.

well, maybe i wasn't...

i make too little noise for you.

i don't like to be alone

but i can't stand the pressure of being your friends.

I like this one. Enjoy.

i don't know where i've been

i can't recall if i'm wearing thin

i don't mind if i'm lost

i don't mind if i'm tired and frail and lost

i left a man in my wake

resented him for what he had to say

i don't mind that i'm alone

i don't mind that my heart, it carries stones

my heart, it carries stones

i told it all, unedited

i told it all like i remembered it

they interlocked and then they fled

and met again, but the love they'd made was dead

i am no historian

i'm prone to error in the records i give

i am proud of what i feel

i am proud that my skin is tempered steel

my skin is tempered steel

kind of a war song

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christmas_truce

I found this great loop by GwenInterrupted from a Forrest Knauff song...I wanted to try again with the words I wrote.

Again, harmonies aren't quite right...does someone want to play around with this?

<3

 In a world of diamond giants

And things, well I don't care to know or hear

I walked across the greying waters

And you poured Southern dust in my ears

To have you pour Southern dust in my ears

I sat on the brink of the night time

And up rose the sound of your strings

You plucked them like plums and they fell in my hand

I took a bite of your dreams

I took a bite of your dreams

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords 

And in the tuning and chords let me hide

You said you were sad in your twenties

And the tears turned into musical chords

But your tears, well they've made me so happy

And in your sadness my spirit has soared

And in your sadness my spirit has soared

You sat all alone on the hard wooden floor

And the darkness leaned in for a peek

And I felt my lungs tighten like a flying car window

As you poured Southern dust in my ears 

As you poured Southern dust in my ears

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords 

And in the tuning and chords let me hide

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind, your mind,

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords 

And in the tuning and chords 

And in the tuning and chords let me hide.

Let me hide

Let me hide.

Do do do

I'm walking around

and I'm upside down

so it's not a frown

it's a smile in disguise

open up your eyes a woah

do do do you

remember when

we learned how to sin

when we first began to realize

we had our own eyes a woah

sometimes these words make since better in my head

so when they leave my lips and scatter in the air

I hope you catch my drift when I say

the words that get stuck deep inside

my hippocampus wrinkle lines

I have the worst time getting them all out

do do do do

I'm thinking about

all the early years

when my salty tears

had sting against my cheeks

but now they just leak a woah

due due due due

the bills are there

in my swivel

and I try to keep my hair

from falling out

like a water spout a woah

sometimes these words make since better in my head

so when they leave my lips and scatter in the air

I hope you catch my drift when I say

the words that get stuck deep inside

my hippocampus wrinkle lines

I have the worst time getting them all out

So, I saw Ryan Adams in Glasgow last night..and, yeah, I am finding it very hard to put into words how brilliant a concert it was. 3 hours of pure, undiluted, acoustic wonderfulness. He is also brilliantly funny. I've had words floating around my head for the past 24 hours, and I just wanted to try [TRY] and write something that in some way conveyed how I felt after this concert. It's like...if you have ever stuck your head out of the window when you are going very fast in a car and for a moment you feel you can't breathe..and then you remember you can. Yeah, that's kinda how I felt all evening.

So, this happened...I feel like I have stolen the melody from somwhere [I really hope I haven't]. It's simple and it feels clumsy and dumb, especially considering what I am trying to write about, but this is my first shot at combining song writing and putting a melody together and it is scary. I was wondering if there were any wonderful musicians out there who might be able to put this to music? Or improve it in some way.

Oh crap, I have rambled long enough. End of gushing.

<3

PS: REALLY not sure about that harmony..it was a last minute thought!

In a world of diamond giants

And things, well I don't care to know or hear

I walked across those greying waters

And you poured Southern dust in my ears

Just to pour Southern dust in my ears

I sat in the thick of the night time

And up rose the sound of your strings

You plucked them like plums and they fell in my hand

I took a bite of your dreams

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords let me hide

And in the tuning and chords let me hide

You said you were sad in your twenties

And the tears turned into musical chords

But your tears, well they've made me so happy

And in your sadness my spirit has soared

You sat all alone on the hard wooden floor

And the darkness leaned in for a peek

And I felt my lungs tighten like a flying car window

As you poured Southern Dust in my ears

As you poured Souther Dust in my ears

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords let me hide

So take me to Carolina,

Let me look inside of your mind, your mind,

Show me the sunsets, the four walls of your bedroom

And in the tuning and chords let me hide.

And in the tuning and chords let me hide.

Dead and Dying Angels-a song by James A. Mangum and Jason Mangum, based on the novel "Dead and Dying Angels" (Libro Uno of the Dos Cruces Trilogy) by James A. Mangum

Some times when I get funky the beat can get dubby.

97 BPM