Another amazing tiny Story's drawing that needs some color!!!!

Remixed version of  Readmooses's illustration for Michal's tiny story 'Outsider'.

This was an excellent exercise in drawing feet :)

Just added some color to Readmooses awesome idea :) it's sort of messy but I tried. - Lucy 

The outsider stood beside

The little low-tide, as it dried

And she sighed as she decided,

"We'd be better off inside."

Alternate version. I was going for desolate but not empty.

This picture was originally created for the Outsider tiny story but perhaps it can be retooled to a new story and a still outsider but new perspective.

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The outsider stood beside

The little low-tide, as it dried

And she sighed as she decided,

"We'd be better off inside."

Version 1 drawing

The outsider stood beside

The little low-tide, as it dried

And he sighed as he decided,

"We'd be better off inside."

I love this little melancholic story. I wanted to show the 'outsider' aspect through the difference in media, the flat ink and the built out paper. Just a prototype I can see someone else doing this much better than me! Thanks for this story (YAY)

I am not exactly an illustrator, but when I have an idea, I try anyway.

I kind of saw the outsider and the little low tide as a person holding hands with a water droplet watching the ocean tide recede through a window.

Not quite a good illustrator nor drawer. This is what comes to mind :)

"Outsider(Tiny story)" - The naked onion is outside its peel. It shall be cooked.

outsider (tiny story) by Michal

i really enjoyed reading this it reminded me of childhood, i remember a hand build ceramic hut somewhere with a staw roof, think its long gone now...

i love to watch the sea.

The outsider stood beside

The little low-tide, as it dried

And she sighed as she decided,

"We'd be better off inside."

***(I had to change he to she)

The outsiders sat beside
The long low-tide, as it dried
One sighed and decided,
"We'd be better off inside."

(Text by Michal, with slight alterations)

I'm not very happy with this illustration, but I thought I'd put it up just in case it gives other people ideas!

My illustration to the tiny story by Michal.

Thanks for all the textures and pictures I used here ;)

i am not good at drawing people so i figured i would describe my concept with a generic overview drawing accompanied by a text description as well and put it out there to see if anyone wanted to illustrate the idea.  here is the idea: we see 2 back yards. in the 1st is a man and his dog standing next to one of those tiny or plastic kiddie pools. in the yard next door on the other side of a fence is a party taking place around a nice in ground pool complete with grilling and cocktails.