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Okay the last version I uploaded was the condensed condensed version but here it is complete. 

Understand that if I'm walking  and its you that i see don't start talking just let me be avoiding you is what I'm going to do We can't meet not us two out of sight out of mind it takes might it takes time maybe some exes remain friends but that's not our case we have no loose ends and it's best if i don't see your face then i can forget look ahead with no regrets about what could be said what we had is all in the past all that remains is the memory and i'd rather forget it all fast so my future won't be put in jeopardy because with you i can only look back i don't see a future with you i only see what we lacked and moving on is what I need to do.

Todd suggested it and thus the song was born thanks to me finding the awesome Electrotechnica song by theysayso-i used a condensed version of my poem Moving On. Please remix/contribute. 

Understand that if I'm walking  and its you that i see don't start talking just let me be avoiding you is what I'm going to do We can't meet not us two out of sight out of mind it takes might it takes time maybe some exes remain friends but that's not our case we have no loose ends and it's best if i don't see your face then i can forget look ahead with no regrets about what could be said what we had is all in the past all that remains is the memory and i'd rather forget it all fast so my future won't be put in jeopardy because with you i can only look back i don't see a future with you i only see what we lacked and moving on is what I need to do.

LOL and me singing if you can call at that-at least it was fun to sing!  if metaphorest felt her song was cheesy then my song is the camp version.  i hope at worst it makes you laugh :) as usual treat this as a demo version  and hopefully someone with a better voice can make it sound beautiful. i also hopefully would like to add intros to the first silent 30 seconds for example: i'm melismayhem and I joined march 20,2010. think it would be cool. the fun lyrics are as follows:

Verse 1

Hey there my web browsing friend

why you looking so bored? Yea lookin' so bored

I guess you have not explored

a site we call hitrecord yeah dot org

hey there my web browsing friend'

I'm sure there's stuff you have stored

stuff you've adored

why let your stuff be ignored

what if it soared yea what if it soared

hey there my skeptical friend

you might just be floored yea totally floored

this is the message it sends

what's your stuff going toward? where's the reward?

hey there my talented friend

it's free so you can afford yea you can afford

so why not come on aboard

come on and see hitrecord yea dot org

Chorus:

For anyone who wants to be creative

and collaborate

the sky is the limit

Verse 2

hey there my web browsing friend

Quit looking so bored! Yea lookin so bored

It's best to start to explore

all we call hitrecord yea dot org

Read all of the terms my friend

join and watch the accord yea right before

your username's forevermore

make sure it's one you adore for forever more

if there is a record you like

heart to see it soar number gets high

so now that you are aboard

start to share hitrecord! yea dot org!

Chorus

Verse 3

Hey my friend on hitrecord

is someone lookin' so bored? yea lookin' so bored

ask them if they have explored

the site we call hitrecord yea dot org

hey my friend on hitrecord

tell them what's about yea all about

explain to them bout your dashboard

show them how you have soared yea you have soared

show them the circles and hearts

play sarah's song you can't go wrong

hey ask your talented friend

what's her stuff going toward yea where's her reward

Let's tell all those who don't know

take em to a show yea a movie show

let's get more views to the site

come and see hitrecord yea dot org

Just to give an idea for a melody of the song should anyone want to sing or add music. 

Would be very honored if someone treated this song I worked very hard on as a demo and rerecorded it. Listen to the instrumental and read the lyrics i can always tweak em. I like creating songs but not so much singing them-especially not when my tooth is broken. Highly recommend using headphones to listen.

Lyrics:

Verse 1 

Hello, It's been so long 

Since we met face to face 

I was weak but now I'm strong

I needed time and space

So now we need to talk

but first just let me say

let's go out and take a walk 

it's such a beautiful day

so here we are outside

and now i'm turning shy

too late to run and hide

do i ask or say good-bye?

Chorus

I want you to come 

I want you to stay

I really don't know which one would be the bigger mistake

I want you to come 

I want you to stay 

but this kind of move is not an easy one to make

(Repeat)

Verse 2

I have only loved you

but you know that about me

now there's something I want to do

Once I get my degree 

This country I want to leave

of that much i am sure

there's so much i want to achieve

and it includes a traveling brochure

Now I just have to decide

If I go with or without you by my side

i know you, you'd go along for the ride

you would happily be my travel guide

but if i take a chance and go all alone

take a chance overseas with the unknown

and leave you back here at home

would my love you forget, my love disown?

Chorus

Verse 3

You own a piece of my heart

I look into your eyes

do i want this to restart

or go off and meet other guys?

If you stay behind

you'll no longer be mine

the girls won't waste any time

you were my most beautiful find

It's happening so fast

yet i have not asked

we could have such a blast

or not we've broken up in the past

You want to know what this is all about

i want to scream it i want to shout

instead i grab your warm hands 

and begin to tell you all about my plans

Chorus

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My version is definitely not the keeper but I would like for whoever does the vocals to follow this melody.

A slightly less traditional take on the folk song melody.

*update* 3/30/12 so I added these to the character collab based on krrr's recommendation as this is in the story I had written was a song by Fuchsia's ex-boyfriend that he sang about her. I was looking for a guy to cover it because a guy is supposed to sing it and there's a link to the vocal less version. Really excited about the possibilities of this collab!

Ok so a guy is supposed to be singing so I tried to keep my voice low and with the cold I'm a bit raspy so I'm sure that's helping. Would love to hear a guy sing this. Tweak it as you like add to the royalty free song, read the story (er chapters I've completed) and lets see what develops. so excited!!!

Sorry about the cough at the end but I have a cold and recovering from surgery so that hurt I couldnt finish but it just goes on.

Lyrics:

Verse 1

From a garden full of flowers

you stood out from all the rest

i picked you from the root out the ground

blossoming and at your best

Chorus:

I never thought I'd see the hour

when I'd have to part with my fuchsia flower

we parted ways and said good-bye

I always miss you-no lie

Verse 2

Your petals were as smooth as silk

no other flower feels as good to me

yours was an unforgettable scent

you were a beautiful sight to see

Chorus:

Bridge fadeout :

When it's raining fuchsia petals from the sky

the garden will no longer be dry

I will be the luckiest guy

I'll be the luckiest guy

Sing along with me please think many harmonies could make it beautiful. Sad about Anne leaving, my latest bout with writer's block so this is the best i could come up with. Guitar is royalty free track i found.

Lyrics:

What is life?

I'm finding out?

What is time?

I'm wasting it

What is love?

I know but I don't

What is right?

I follow my heart

What is life?

I'm finding out

Lyrics arent much but they were heartfelt when i wrote them and sang them.

Boy this track gave me Hell but I finished it. If anyone's interested i can upload the instrumental part.

Lyrics:

Intro: the road less traveled on

All alone I'm on this road all by myself and

All I have is my heart to guide me and lead the way

left right right left this is not an easy road to follow

yield stop yield stop turn around that's what you'll hear people say so

with one foot in front of the other I will go on

If I start to falter I will think of this song

It may take me a good while since this path is long

I wil keep on going since stopping feels so wrong

If you feel like joining me well then come along

if we start to falter we will think of this song.

Lyrics:

Chorus:

I look ahead

that's what I said

I mean every word

believe this bird

I'm of age

need out from this cage

so let me be

and set me free

Verse 1

I'm done with feelings of regret

done with my face getting wet

except from rain with thunder crashing loud

or from me standing in my porcelain cloud

I've learned to appreciate

dark clouds not as fate

not as a destination

but as transportation

wouldn't know the beauty of sunny days

without nature's dark and stormy ways

my life is a puzzle to rearrange

the pieces equal to a scenery change

Chorus

Bridge:

No more tears, moving on

Verse 2

My thoughts always before

filled with the baggage that i stored

memories of people gone

still in my brain they lived on

not sure I understood why

Images I could not pry

but when I felt so lost

I turned to He on the cross

Chorus

Bridge

Final verse:

I'm spending my days keeping my face dry

Only once in my whole life
Did I ever want to be a wife
But Im at a certain age
In my life a certain stage
There's a question I cant answer
And though I try
Is less more?
Cause Ive yet to love like I did before
I care but in a different way
My thoughts are at night even when its day
Im no longer a young girl
And this has rocked my world
I want womanly things
But first I want to wear a ring
Even though times have changed
I have not though it may seem deranged
So how do I choose?
Either way I can win and lose
So will the answer come from above?
Or do I just have to change my definition of love?

In the morning as I wake

the tears are real the smile is fake

a house doesn't make a home

With people but all alone

Wanted truth-not lies

Now my heart so cries

Nobody knows me when I'm down

Friends see me coming and turn around

They don't stay true

I think I need new

Wanted truth-not lies

Now my heart so cries

In the morning as I wake

the tears are real the smile is fake

I simply wipe my tears away

Get on my knees and start to pray

Wanted truth-not lies

Now my heart so cries

La la la la la la la...

I simply wipe my tears away

Get on my knees and start to pray

Wanted truth-not lies

Now my heart so cries.

I love what Tibbs did with my poem and when I heard this royalty free track I decided I could do a different take on it.

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