RECorded in the shade under the great tree that reigns in our backyard, I had this little blues lick and it fit with the words of Metaphorest's poem, so here's a rough little jam on that.
it's a blues in F major. i have no words for verses (yet), so i left little parts of this open to possibly in filled in with something. if one can think of or find words that fit the rhythm and mood.

happy REmixing <3

so here's the extended version of the REmix i made of Marke's blues riff.

i RE-RECorded the parts, added some bbbbass and added a middle part, based on Marke and Babbish's suggestion.

The format here is the main part 4 times through, then the middle part - lather, rinse, and repeat

The middle part's chords are C and G round a couple times.

Happy REmixing <3

RJ

ADDED WAY MORE OF YOU!!!  As of today, I have added all current howlers to the mix, as well as boosted some levels and tweeked some timing issues.  Feel free to keep howling though!  I don't mind making new mixes. In fact, I look forward to it.  As for me I will continue to work on the mix and instrumentation as I await your barbaric yawps.

I decided to fuck around with some blues scales and this is what I came up with. Definitely need some remixing on this one. Get on it.

I don't even know if this would even be considered Blues but this song kind of came from this Blues scale in A I was checking out. So that's why I called it a blues riff. Am I rambling?

I am completely stuck on what to do with this song; so I thought I'd throw it up here and see if you awesome musicians could help me out - if you need the stems, just lemme know; "ask and ye shall receive" I always say.

****Lyrics:

once pristine vials of nascent youth

now a broken heart i can't refuse

if i could hear you one more time

i'm sure i'd eventually change my mind

but you're dead and gone

where you belong

i think i'll let the ghosts of my past stay dead

the mirrors have become infused

with portraits of what was once you

they monitor my every step

with every condescending breath

but you're dead and gone

right where you belong

so why can't these ghosts of my past stay dead?

as the years disintegrate

i slowly forget the mistakes i made

just when i think i made it out

i see your face in every cloud

i thought you were dead and gone

right where you belong

but the ghosts of my past are resurrecting

I'm feelin it.

Ease up on the pains of being so caught up in chains

My shackles fit just fine at least I know they are mine

My heart is too heavy to burn

My heart is too heavy to burn.

Size me up to a paper cup 

and I'll tell you what poison I choose.

What is winning to me

When I have everything to lose?

Repeat: Chorus

I'll drink my booze 

while you pick my brain

as right as the rain.

No one knows the debts 

that you pay when you 

are paying them to a scroll.

Repeat: Chorus

When I heard this song by Almost Sound it reminded me of my favorite influence in music. Hope you guys enjoy it as much as I do.

added some harmonica, maracas, and some cardboard box.

didn't care to adjust the tempo, just ran with Marke for this one :)

definitely going to mess around with this some more soon.

<3