I felt the illustration took to a child's point of view. Therefore, I had my eldest daughter (8 1/2) -she wants the half! Do the VO, give me feedback about using the kiddo (mine only!)
One day she looked up and discovered an opening in her planet.
She wondered if she wasn't alone after all.
It won't give me the story or illustration to resource!
Ryan Patrick-tiny story
and when the day is done
I will follow you into the sun
I love love love this RECord of wirrow's-can't wait to see it animated! (AND ON A SHIRT IN THE WINTER!) ;)